Re: The incipit of Mark against the birth story
Posted: Tue May 09, 2023 3:27 am
There is also a certain irony in appealing to the Iliad, since it too has an "incipit," and could hardly be clearer about the scope of the work (following Fagles's English-language translation)
Mark is not quite this clear in his opening lines, although there is some elegance to his launch of Jesus's public career with an aura of prophecy hanging in the air. And this beginning makes clear enough that the story is, and will be throughout, written for adults about adults. (Yes, there are children along the way, being cared for and nutured as is the ordinary adult role in the human life cycle).
I am tempted to justify Mark's choice (e.g. what is so interesting for adults about Joseph believing a dream that his pregnant fiancee hadn't cheated on him?), but that exceeds the topic. The storyteller must begin somewhere. There is a certain humor in American letters about how the late James Michener used to begin his historical novels (+/- starting at the creation of the universe, like a secular GJohn, or if in a rush, just a few million years ago when Hawai'i first emerged from the Pacific Ocean). Different artists make different choices; there need not be any question of standing "against" other artists making different choices.
So to say that Homer begins "in media res" is not just a garden-variety slip-up (oops, the Iliad is not a military or diplomatic history of the Trojan War, but rather a story set during the Trojan War), but a plain disregard of the black letters on the page which tell directly what story will be told (Achilles's wrath and its heroic-scale consequences) and where the story will begin - at a very defensible place to call its beginning (= what was Achilles wrathful about?).Rage - Goddess sing the rage of Peleus's son Achilles
murderous, doomed, that cost the Acheans countless losses,
... [lots of people died, Zeus got involved] ...
Begin, Muse, when the two first broke and clashed,
Agamemnon lord of men and brilliant Achilles
Mark is not quite this clear in his opening lines, although there is some elegance to his launch of Jesus's public career with an aura of prophecy hanging in the air. And this beginning makes clear enough that the story is, and will be throughout, written for adults about adults. (Yes, there are children along the way, being cared for and nutured as is the ordinary adult role in the human life cycle).
I am tempted to justify Mark's choice (e.g. what is so interesting for adults about Joseph believing a dream that his pregnant fiancee hadn't cheated on him?), but that exceeds the topic. The storyteller must begin somewhere. There is a certain humor in American letters about how the late James Michener used to begin his historical novels (+/- starting at the creation of the universe, like a secular GJohn, or if in a rush, just a few million years ago when Hawai'i first emerged from the Pacific Ocean). Different artists make different choices; there need not be any question of standing "against" other artists making different choices.